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Basics of Writing

Alternatives to 30 overused words

Words can change over time; more often than not, they mean something entirely different.

All in all, there are many ways to reinforce your writing.

You can pick one or all of these techniques to use if you need re-enforcement in your writing.

The key is to remember to use these techniques in moderation. Otherwise, your writing will start to sound repetitive.

Avoid using the word ‘very’ because it’s lazy. A man is not very tired, he is exhausted. Don’t use very sad, use morose. Language was invented for one reason, boys – to woo women – and, in that endeavor, laziness will not do.

Professor Keating, Dead Poets Society

This list will help you think about how to liven up your manuscript by replacing filler-type words with others that could pack a punch.

30 overused words and some practical alternatives

  1. A lot: copious, countless, myriad, numerous, plentiful, several
  2. Amazing, awesome: astonishing, fascinating, incredible, marvelous, stunning, wonderful
  3. Also: additionally, besides, furthermore, in addition to, moreover, to boot
  4. Bad: deficient, inferior, dreadful, atrocious, unacceptable, unsatisfactory, erroneous
  5. Big: considerable, vast, colossal, extensive, substantial, immense, ample, copious
  6. Change: transform, modify, revise, switch, transition, adjust, alter, rework
  7. Definitely: absolutely, undeniably, positively, doubtless, plainly, surely, specifically
  8. Easy: uncomplicated, effortless, straightforward, adept, amiable, responsive
  9. Fine: outstanding, exceptional, magnificent, well-made, admirable, first-rate
  10. Get: acquire, obtain, accomplish, attain, extort, extract, glean, secure, procure
  11. Give: bestow, relinquish, permit, award, bequeath, dispense, administer, contribute
  12. Good: satisfying, stupendous, proficient, valuable, acceptable, worthy, congenial
  13. Great: excellent, exceptional, unmitigated, proficient, marvelous, expert
  14. Happy: contented, jubilant, ecstatic, elated, overjoyed, captivated, upbeat, gratified
  15. Hard: arduous, troublesome, demanding, strenuous, onerous, exacting, complicated
  16. Help: advice, guidance, remedy, corrective, assist, service, cooperation, comfort
  17. Important: crucial, significant, essential, critical, meaningful, vital, far-reaching, imperative
  18. Interesting: engaging, stimulating, captivating, compelling, absorbing, meaningful, notable
  19. Keep: retain, preserve, possess, manage, amass, conserve, detain, garner, control
  20. Know: experience, comprehend, acquainted, distinguish, differentiate, realize, discern
  21. Like: similar, comparable, related, corresponding, equivalent, resembling, equal
  22. Like: enjoy, relish, admire, cherish, regard, extol, appreciate, commend, respect
  23. Look: glimpse, contemplate, survey, inspection, glance, attention, review
  24. Nice: gracious, pleasurable, charming, amiable, well-mannered, genial, pleasing, seemly
  25. Quite: considerably, absolutely, thoroughly, in all respects, utterly, all-in-all, purely
  26. Really: literally, genuinely, categorically, in effect, unquestionably, undoubtedly, honestly
  27. Said: announced, expressed, uttered, revealed, described, disclosed, divulged, intimated
  28. So: apparently, accordingly, likewise, similarly, consequently, hence, provided that
  29. Then: suddenly, formerly, in that event, subsequently, appropriately, as a consequence
  30. Very: profoundly, extremely, truly, greatly, notably, prominently, suitably, immensely, vitally

Most writers use words that are overused in communication to convey superfluous meaning.

We are all guilty of this to some extent, but it’s worth being aware of.

Think about it: how many times have you heard the phrase “until,” “however,” “although,” “obviously,” or “in all fairness”?

How many times have you heard the phrase “I’m sorry”?

Did you ever stop to think it’s not necessary?

I’ve shared my tips for how to avoid overused words and phrases.

If you use them, make sure that you’re deliberate.

Don’t hesitate to use any of the alternatives I’ve provided.

Since they’re uncommon, they will make your writing more interesting.

Guilliean Pacheco (she/her) is an American of Filipino descent. She is an early career full-stack writer by day and raconteuse by night. Her journey includes earning an M.F.A. in Writing from the University of San Francisco, a Media Writing certificate from the New School, and becoming an Anaphora Arts poetry fellow. She's also a valued A.I.R. and IWW FJU member, deeply rooted in her passion for supporting the creative community. A misplaced California girl, she lives in Las Vegas normally — if one could call living there normal — on Southern Paiute land.

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